I am a Year 8 learner in Room 2 at Pt England School in Auckland, NZ. My teacher is Ms. Tapuke.
Friday, 4 November 2016
My bush walk story
In a dark and scary forest there was two girls taking a walking in the middle of a cave. There names were Lucy and Rosie. They were sisters that really wanted to hunt for a dragon. They wanted a dragon with wings had a fire breathing mouth and had two eyes and a big nose to smell something. They were also hoping that the dragon was like a dog but with wings. Rosie said to Lucy that if they found a dragon she would name it gray because the dragon would be gray but Lucy said no! Because she was a girly girl so she wanted to name it fuzzy. Until they heard a noise. Roar! It sounded like a dragon said Rosie. Lucy said no it can’t be a dragon and Rosie said Yes it definitely is a dragon. Lucy said that she would like to stay where it is safer until she heard the nose get even louder. Rosie said well if you want to get eaten alive then you can stay there. Lucy thinned and thinned until she talked Rosie doesn’t know dragons live in a cave and Rosie said Yes in a strung voice. Lucy said and aren't we standing in the front of a cave and Rosie said Yes so they went into the cave and they saw a dragon giving birth to two baby dragons. Until three adults came in and said yes we found a big dragon. One of the adults was a kind adult and the other were two mean adults. The kind adolf said no these two girls found it and Rosie and Lucy said thank you. When the adults heard that they said don’t you want to be famous and the kind adolt said yes Then help us bring the dragon to our village. The kids said that's not fair we found this dragon first then the adults said that haven't you seen how sad our village is. Well it will be sad to see the village safer in pane said Lucy but Rosie Said ya but do you knew how cool it will be if we ride on a real dragon and Lucy said that she should have not been sisters with Rosie and Rosie said that she should have not been sisters with Lucy. All three adults said that there plane has worked and that if one of the girls come and be with us then maybe we can make one of them help us and then betrayed them. When the kind adult heard that he tiptoed to the two girls and told them the two mean adult plan. When they heard that they said what!! Very very loud. Shhhhhhh said the kind adult because if the two mean adults knew that i told you then they will not aloud me to be their friend anymore. What said Lucy in a very small voice. Well let me tell you. A long way back when i was 5 i had just started school and i was a bit like a nerd. I had brown skin like the ground, yellow hair like the sun and i was so shy that i almost peed my pants until i saw these two. They were brothers that played in a band that i loved ever since i was 4. They loved green like me they had brown skin like me and they had yellow hair like me. That time they were very very kind. When people were being mean to me they come and save me like this one time i was 6 and i was walking to school with my older sister named Amber. We were walking to school until my sister saw her friends so she went with them and left me walking the class by myself.There i was just walking to school until mean boys started to fight with me and i didn’t know how to fight that time and look and me now. Just carry on with the story or else i will leave said Rosie. Okey man jezzzzzzzz. Okey so i was just lying down because i thought that if i acted like i was dead then i think that they will go away. Well i was lying down i knew that they would go away but they didn’t. They started to kick me and one of them kicked me in the head until them two came along. When they saw me they said to leave me alone and that if they didn’t then they will tell on them on their mother and fathers and also the principal or the teacher. Then the meanys said okay we will leave him alone and one day wheel come for you guys. When i saw them do that for me i felt like they were my brothers and that i can trust them on anything. Until…. One faithful day when i was at there house we were watching our favourite movie called pitch perfect 2. We had popcorn, 3 big bottles of diet coc, a big block of chocolate and one big jar of lollies. It was so fun until they saw a website about if you want to be famous you have to look for a big scary monster and if we did then we would be able to have as much money as we want.Then that is when they said if we should go and look for a dragon and i said yes but i wasn't thinking at all so then we packed lots and lots of food and lots of water bottles. While we were wondering around we heard a noise. One of the brothers said if we heard that and i said no i didn’t hear that because i bring a egg. Then one of the brothers said what!! Why would you bring a egg. I said because i was a vegetarian and you vegetarians we don’t like to eat meat. Then he said well why couldn’t you just grab something else and i said that i love eggs more than anything else. Until we winded up in here. So ya thats the end of my story. When looked at Lucy and Rosie he saw them crying. When he saw them crying he said to them if they could please be quiet for just one second. When he that Lucy and Rosie were doing a very strange noise. The two adults very close to them so they said is this why you don’t want to become famous. The kind adult said yes it’s because this isn't rite we have to let the two girls take the dragon with them. Until Rosie had a idea and it was that if we could show our parents and take a photo with it and show our family then you guys can get it and try taking it back to where you guys came from bt please promise to us that you will take very good care of fuzzy. Fine hen we have a diele. But if you girls break the promise them you girls have to be our slaves. Okey then and if you guys break the promise then you guys have to give us 9000 dollars. The End
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