In the beginning a lady said that Ben Johnson didn’t look human to her because of his huge muscles and his big red eyes. A man also said that Ben Johnson’s start was just phenomenal because when he started he was so close to winning the race. Well Ben Johnson was racing in the 100 metres sprint with carl lewis, ben Johnson broke the world record. After the amazing race Ben Johnson got a medal for winning the race but they didn’t no that he took drugs. After that Ben Johnson raced to the airport with his medal because he didn’t want to get caught for taking drugs. Before he could get on the plane they did a urine test on Ben Johnson. When they finally found out that Ben Johnson took drugs then they stripped off Ben Johnson's gold medal.
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Hi there Mamarae,
ReplyDeleteI really like the way that you have been talking about the (T.O.P.S) and I also like the way that you have writing about your characters. I really like your drawing of a plane and I wish that I could draw just like you.
Keep up the amazing work and I look forward to your next brilliant work that you have been learning about in class time. What you need to improve on is writing your labels and also looking at making your paragraphs long and short.
Love from your Big Sister,
Roimata Ru.