“NO!! I ain’t going there by myself” said Jason (Pause) “Ok,
so you might be wandering “what the heck is happening right
now?!”, well let’s start from the beginning shall we?” It started
in New York with 4 different high school students. Their names
were Josh, Jason, Tiare and Sofie. Josh and Sofie were the brainiest
yet very weird students from their class. Josh was allergic and
scared of almost everything, and Sofie didn’t really like sports. On
the other hand Tiare was one of the most popular girls in the Rydell
High School. She was very ani-social and couldn’t LIVE without her
precious phone, but did have just a few real friends. Jason was the
football captain and quarterback which made him one of the popular
students too, but he was still friends with Josh. Suddenly,
one day their lives changed! ”Ok c’mon, we’re gonna be late because of you!”
said Jason. Josh aggressively screamed “UGH!! Just wait, I need to put my hand
sanitizer on. You can never be too sure about what you're touching” So while
they were walking to school Jason asked “Hey bro, do you have it?” and Josh
responded with a quite “yeah”. He handed in Jason’s homework and said “please,
never ask me to do this again” and Jason responded with a hug and said “k”.
Tiare just woke up and posted a selfie of her in the morning, while Sofie was
waiting outside for her. “Hurry up Tiare, I need to get to school!” Tiare got
ready and they both started walking to school. During class Tiare was on a call
with her best friend because her other best friend left, and she needed emotional
support. “(Cough cough) would you mind putting your phone away, because
i’m trying to teach a lesson here” said the teacher. “Miss, I just need some emotional
support because my best friend just left and I really need some support where my other
best friend is providing it to me” said Tiare. “Ok then, that’s detention” said the teacher.
Tiare was so angry, but she didn’t really mind. Josh and Sofie were doing P.E until he
overheard the sports teacher and Sofie arguing, and the last thing he heard
was “DETENTION!”. Then he got called to the office and saw Jason there.
The teacher read out the assignment he did and said to him that that’s the exact same thing he wrote down before on his assignment. So they both got given
detention as well. The principle came in and told them that their job was to clean inside a
classroom so that they could change it into a computer classroom. They all did as they were
told, but Josh saw a game inside all the rubbish. “Hm, Guys look, it’s a game” said Josh.
Everyone came running and said just hurry up let’s play this game. They were all choosing
their characters, but then the game started lighting up. They were all panicking and saying
to shut the game off, but non of them wanted to get near it. The game started sucking them
in and all they saw was they were all in different bodies. “AHHHHHHHH” Josh came flying down,
and his avatar was a female. All he could hear from the sky was screaming, and BOOM! He go
t landed on by 3 more people. One was a girl and two were guys. “Who the heck are you guys?”
asked Josh, “well i don’t know, but sup, i’m Jason. What’s your name?”. Josh looked around as
he could see that all of them were different genders and that they were all the same people from
detention. “ wait… I think we all got sucked into this game and became our avatars.
Everyone was confused until they heard Tiare scream “WHERE IS MY PHONE?!”.
They were all trying to calm her down,but she just started having a melt down.
She started screaming and crying and then got eaten by a rhino.
Everyone was scared, until she came flying from the sky and landed on Josh.
They all started screaming and running until a man came in a car and said
“well what are you looking at? Get in!”. Everyone quickly ran into the car and the
man drove off. He told them that there is a man named Diablos who is trying to
take over the country.
so you might be wandering “what the heck is happening right
now?!”, well let’s start from the beginning shall we?” It started
in New York with 4 different high school students. Their names
were Josh, Jason, Tiare and Sofie. Josh and Sofie were the brainiest
yet very weird students from their class. Josh was allergic and
scared of almost everything, and Sofie didn’t really like sports. On
the other hand Tiare was one of the most popular girls in the Rydell
High School. She was very ani-social and couldn’t LIVE without her
precious phone, but did have just a few real friends. Jason was the
football captain and quarterback which made him one of the popular
students too, but he was still friends with Josh. Suddenly,
one day their lives changed! ”Ok c’mon, we’re gonna be late because of you!”
said Jason. Josh aggressively screamed “UGH!! Just wait, I need to put my hand
sanitizer on. You can never be too sure about what you're touching” So while
they were walking to school Jason asked “Hey bro, do you have it?” and Josh
responded with a quite “yeah”. He handed in Jason’s homework and said “please,
never ask me to do this again” and Jason responded with a hug and said “k”.
Tiare just woke up and posted a selfie of her in the morning, while Sofie was
waiting outside for her. “Hurry up Tiare, I need to get to school!” Tiare got
ready and they both started walking to school. During class Tiare was on a call
with her best friend because her other best friend left, and she needed emotional
support. “(Cough cough) would you mind putting your phone away, because
i’m trying to teach a lesson here” said the teacher. “Miss, I just need some emotional
support because my best friend just left and I really need some support where my other
best friend is providing it to me” said Tiare. “Ok then, that’s detention” said the teacher.
Tiare was so angry, but she didn’t really mind. Josh and Sofie were doing P.E until he
overheard the sports teacher and Sofie arguing, and the last thing he heard
was “DETENTION!”. Then he got called to the office and saw Jason there.
The teacher read out the assignment he did and said to him that that’s the exact same thing he wrote down before on his assignment. So they both got given
detention as well. The principle came in and told them that their job was to clean inside a
classroom so that they could change it into a computer classroom. They all did as they were
told, but Josh saw a game inside all the rubbish. “Hm, Guys look, it’s a game” said Josh.
Everyone came running and said just hurry up let’s play this game. They were all choosing
their characters, but then the game started lighting up. They were all panicking and saying
to shut the game off, but non of them wanted to get near it. The game started sucking them
in and all they saw was they were all in different bodies. “AHHHHHHHH” Josh came flying down,
and his avatar was a female. All he could hear from the sky was screaming, and BOOM! He go
t landed on by 3 more people. One was a girl and two were guys. “Who the heck are you guys?”
asked Josh, “well i don’t know, but sup, i’m Jason. What’s your name?”. Josh looked around as
he could see that all of them were different genders and that they were all the same people from
detention. “ wait… I think we all got sucked into this game and became our avatars.
Everyone was confused until they heard Tiare scream “WHERE IS MY PHONE?!”.
They were all trying to calm her down,but she just started having a melt down.
She started screaming and crying and then got eaten by a rhino.
Everyone was scared, until she came flying from the sky and landed on Josh.
They all started screaming and running until a man came in a car and said
“well what are you looking at? Get in!”. Everyone quickly ran into the car and the
man drove off. He told them that there is a man named Diablos who is trying to
take over the country.
To Be Continued
Hi Mamarae. That was an interesting story that you wrote today. I like how you have included the use of hand sanitiser because it reminds me of what we have all been doing over the last few weeks. The second half of your story reminded me of the movie Jumanji. Maybe you could work on using paragraphs next. Great effort!
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